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PostSubject: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Thu Jan 20, 2011 7:50 pm

The path so far:
It has 2 COMPLETE chapters
3rd is on it's way

It has an RPG on Armorgames.com community--->forum games--->Clash RPG

Characters
The Cyberstep characters that appear in it:
Crimrose
Winberrl
Lazflamme
Mecha Jetter
Mecha Jetter Girl(i took the freedom to name her Julie)
Jikun Hu
Jikun Long
Lily Rain
Ouka
Sould i put Maril or Izuna?

WAIT BCOS this is not complete

My characters:
Alpha
Commander Mordin
Dornum
Marked One
Orochi "Shadow"
Death Fate

THIS ONE is not complete too


Weapons/guns/swords/anything that can kill:


Warscreamer(my puppy^^)
Lasher machine pistol
"CHUCK"Assault rifle
Composite knife
Punisher heavy pistol
Hellbringer flame pistol
Shoty
Ye olde Hunting rifle
Blaster pistol
composite sword
EMP blade

LOTS OF CB'S WEAPONRY
like
handgun
survival knife
beam gun
particle gun
short sword
metal slayer
...
Armors that will make appeareance:

Gaedes power armor:this is Alpha's power armor,and it PWNS
Locust:great agility is gave to whoever use it
Cursed armor:an ancient armor found near the underground expansions on Nian's Prime headquaters
Demi-mech:it says all





Chapters:

Chapter 1
Spoiler:
 


Chapter2:
Spoiler:
 

Chapter 3:
Spoiler:
 




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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:03 pm

Why no one's replying in here?
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:22 pm

wall of text maybe?

beg me pardon but i don't understand almost half phase since my english suck and google translator didn't help me anything.
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anyway, i think you should increase the size of text. my opinion is those text are too small.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:32 pm

thanks for being the first one to post here that wasn't me.And also those are the OLD chapters.i'm working to make them fit all of my characters.
If you say to me your language i might try to make them in a way you don't need the google translator.^^
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:41 pm

you're doing good the problem are google translator already suck and my skill poor.
lot of word didn't proper translate to my language.

i'll learn more until i can read all of them. cheers
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:06 pm

if you wish i can help you with that.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:36 pm

Okay.. To tell you the truth... I doesn't notice this thread.

Anyway, I suggest you the change "My Manga" title to "My Story", "My Novel" or "My Light Novel" or probably you and to add "of CosmicBreak" at the back since the way it was shown. It doesn't let it to be seen like Manga at all. It's more like short story with chapters or light novel as i can see.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:21 pm

@Wolf Hikari wrote:
Okay.. To tell you the truth... I doesn't notice this thread.

Anyway, I suggest you the change "My Manga" title to "My Story", "My Novel" or "My Light Novel" or probably you and to add "of CosmicBreak" at the back since the way it was shown. It doesn't let it to be seen like Manga at all. It's more like short story with chapters or light novel as i can see.
Umhum...
ok i'll try.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:04 am

Tl;Dr
all i can guess is its a novel with CB's character,and setting?
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:34 am

@Wolf Hikari wrote:
Okay.. To tell you the truth... I doesn't notice this thread.

Anyway, I suggest you the change "My Manga" title to "My Story", "My Novel" or "My Light Novel" or probably you and to add "of CosmicBreak" at the back since the way it was shown. It doesn't let it to be seen like Manga at all. It's more like short story with chapters or light novel as i can see.

He's supposed to get his brother to draw the manga version but his brother only wants $$$ so no manga yet.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:03 am

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@Wolf Hikari wrote:
Okay.. To tell you the truth... I doesn't notice this thread.

Anyway, I suggest you the change "My Manga" title to "My Story", "My Novel" or "My Light Novel" or probably you and to add "of CosmicBreak" at the back since the way it was shown. It doesn't let it to be seen like Manga at all. It's more like short story with chapters or light novel as i can see.

He's supposed to get his brother to draw the manga version but his brother only wants $$$ so no manga yet.

bro want money from little bro, what an ass bounce
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:18 am

That's...
Okay guys, enough of that.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:49 am

@Hyoka wrote:

He's supposed to get his brother to draw the manga version but his brother only wants $$$ so no manga yet.

Not bro.Cousin.
If he were my brother he would do it for free.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 12:06 pm

which reminds me that my lil brother is the one who is doing this shit up!
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 1:48 pm

OH SHET,WOLF'S WITH BAD MOOD!!!!!!
No one mess with him!
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:00 pm

AS THIS IS MADE BY FANS AND DESTINATED TO FANS,EVERYONE WHO THINKS THAT IT CAN MAKE THE CHAPTERS BETTER,JUST EDIT AND PUT IT HERE.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Tue Jan 25, 2011 1:08 am

Looking at this thread just wanna make me put out my big idea of my fanmade manga setting already.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Tue Jan 25, 2011 6:23 am

you want a story
I'll give you a story

a story writing duel then?

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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Tue Jan 25, 2011 10:57 am

@necrio wrote:
you want a story
I'll give you a story

a story writing duel then?

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You're kiding me,right?Domiclown kills everything.
As i said,if someone thinks that her/him can do the chapters better,they can mess around with them.if they're good,them i'll use them on the manga.Same for ideas.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:14 pm

Who should i ad to CyberStep's list of characters:
Maril March
OR
Izuna Kamui?
And any ideas you'd like to see in it?
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Fri Jan 28, 2011 3:47 pm

i'm Kamui lover so yes, i vote for Kamui
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Fri Jan 28, 2011 5:10 pm

Ok,and do you have any ideas or something you'd like to ask?
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:42 pm

Mecha Jetter Girl says "Wait, why do I have to be called Julie?"

Why hasn't Cyberstep given the Cosmic Fangirl names? I know I'll ask Cyberstep! XDDDDDDD
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:45 pm

First name it came to my head.If you wish you can say another name for her.
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PostSubject: Re: My manga/light novel hybrid for the CB FANS   Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:42 pm

I went and asked CyberStep, just waiting for the email though...
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