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PostSubject: School Life   Mon Jan 18, 2016 3:04 am

So here's a story I started. It's a little story about the average school life of 12 girls who get accepted into a prestigious academy Smile Like all girls, they go through stress, friendships, and drama, but the experience they have together is once in a lifetime! Please give me any feedback you have, as it really helps, and I hope you enjoy reading Smile

Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YEqsdbJKTu3QLknl42Q5LBqlKMb6RrHMp7yScs-L7aU/edit?usp=sharing
Chapter 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fOJQ3utRwQbxRaVEk0ssGlFR0BFPflKdEYSndnAiH24/edit?usp=sharing
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PostSubject: Re: School Life   Tue Jan 26, 2016 2:50 am

Hey, just read the story! I liked the introduction very well, since you used simple words but still described things in detail (although I admit I may have accidentally skimmed through some paragraphs), like how the school uniform looked like and whatnot, while still keeping the story and flashbacks in check. Personally, I'm rooting for Rouge because no one else seemed intresting enough in such a sotry where people fight to the death because they spend time training instead of studying. It's actually pretty interesting due to the path and all. I wouldn't mind if this was the story for some RPG fighting game or something. Might be a good edutainment thing.

Feedback? I'm not sure. There's nothing really wrong with it or anything as far as I've read. Everything seems to be okay.

Enjoyed reading it? Sure I did!

Oh, and one more thing... since this isn't CB-related, you should post it somewhere else like The Lounge or something next time, I think.
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PostSubject: Re: School Life   Fri Nov 25, 2016 3:04 am

Hello I'm Gustavo Woltmann, and here's my School life in Panama. My life is great, I have great friends and also we always help each other to learn more. We have made a band and I'm a guitarist. We always play during get together campus events and band battles. when we are young we want to write and dreamed to become part of a book or song publishers. Now still dreaming about it. How about you guys?
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